That looks really nice. I love how you included the creases in the fabric, not a lot of artist do sadly.
I applaud the fact you included the little things like the folds and ripples in the gathering.
I think your attention to details is very nice. Her wrist cuff is especially nice to me, it has layers and feels like it has substance. I think her hair needs a bit more life, but overall I think you are a good artist! Keep continuing to improve!This would look great with some color. :)
Cute, I really like the gathering (?). The hand is drawn nicely too, that's usually the hardest part for people (like me lol... "orz)!
It's lovely! Perhaps the eyes could be a little bit bigger but that's my taste ^^I especially like the top of her jsk and her wristcuff ^^
I love that you drew her face in a more 'realistic' way. Your lines look so nice and delicate, I really think you are a good artist.